tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4337036001455928562.post4357205905926016538..comments2023-10-31T07:32:08.400-07:00Comments on humid tea and dry pines poetry: Transparent DesiresRob Jacksonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04982759910079119392noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4337036001455928562.post-28795345486073064932017-04-05T19:32:58.406-07:002017-04-05T19:32:58.406-07:00Huge fan of the way you've structured this poe...Huge fan of the way you've structured this poem as one sentence...but one that gives the reader much to think about.C.C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16393100446679896378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4337036001455928562.post-41499948918095196022017-04-03T12:38:45.647-07:002017-04-03T12:38:45.647-07:00Quite a beautifully written poem :)Quite a beautifully written poem :)Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4337036001455928562.post-32610635751452775762017-04-02T21:14:51.317-07:002017-04-02T21:14:51.317-07:00Interesting lines. I feel there's much energy ...Interesting lines. I feel there's much energy still left to create an equitable world though words like 'finite' and 'tourist' make it seem impossible. Not sure if I read your poem correctly. Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4337036001455928562.post-78054872182455697452017-04-02T17:50:07.212-07:002017-04-02T17:50:07.212-07:00Wonderful words; and I so love and admire one-sent...Wonderful words; and I so love and admire one-sentence poems.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4337036001455928562.post-31792120218916625832017-04-02T17:35:26.609-07:002017-04-02T17:35:26.609-07:00Energy to melt the fissures together and repair th...Energy to melt the fissures together and repair the holes..........it is hard to keep summoning that energy, given the state of things. Yet somehow we must.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01926508656571639801noreply@blogger.com