Listening (Grateful Perspective)
Songs
that never caused ripples
on the morning water,
now crash and wear the stones
with curled white knuckles,
or maybe the palms
have just forgotten
how they once bent
amid the hurricane
that rewrote the musical staff,
changing the channels and passed
to open and close.
But now my aging borders
crack,
spilling the fertile soil
and welcoming the tides
to enter.
Robert L. Jackson III
I love that image of the aging borders cracking, allowing the sea to enter. Fantastic!
ReplyDeleteThis is lovely! I enjoyed the words, which went so well with the photo.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely breathtaking...!!
ReplyDeleteYou make me think of King Lear wandering a desert he can no longer control. May the hands remember still, remember a little ....
ReplyDeleteBeautiful symbology, and a lovely response to the idea of song. (Perhaps you could link to the Poets United prompt, too, to help others find it?)
ReplyDeleteOh, I realise you are new to this community – welcome! – and as I am new to giving prompts, I didn't ask people to post a link; sorry!
DeleteI like the word pictures you paint here.
ReplyDeleteNicely done!
ReplyDeleteAge opening the borders to let the tide in is a nice image.
ReplyDeleteI think of music and water almost as one. A beautiful ripple of life...
ReplyDeletelove the flow in this...welcome to Poets United...
ReplyDeleteRobert, we all enjoy comments as much as you do....hope we will see you visiting others as well. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteThanks to everyone for their comments!
ReplyDeleteThe urgency in this is accented by the use of hurricane.
ReplyDelete"welcoming the tides to enter." Finally have to open ourselves to the inevitable, hopefully with grace. Lovely poem
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