I love that image of a formless moon walking across the dark.
Wow! Good, good. I feel the pull of that newness and of this poem.
yes, still pulls.....
Ah yes the influence of the moon: on the tides the weather and the minds of men, age old.Muchđź’–love
Wow, what a great write.
Oh this is such a splendid write!!
sheer marvel of a poem - succinct and not one wasted word on the jellyfish jaunt
Oh what a great piece of art this is! I love it!
Oh, this is perfect. Couldnt be better.
Great poem about the pulling...
Terse lines and compelling images... Nice!
Perfectly expressed.
Remembering how to walk in the dark Love that Can relate to that Great poem
So we waitfor celestial progressOne gives way to the moon more often than not!Hank
A beauty, Rob. The pull of the moon is universal.
We do feel that unavoidable pull.
Wow, I love this:"So we waitfor celestial progress"
I love that image of a formless moon walking across the dark.
ReplyDeleteWow! Good, good. I feel the pull of that newness and of this poem.
ReplyDeleteyes, still pulls.....
ReplyDeleteAh yes the influence of the moon: on the tides the weather and the minds of men, age old.
ReplyDeleteMuchđź’–love
Wow, what a great write.
ReplyDeleteOh this is such a splendid write!!
ReplyDeletesheer marvel of a poem - succinct and not one wasted word on the jellyfish jaunt
ReplyDeleteOh what a great piece of art this is! I love it!
ReplyDeleteOh, this is perfect. Couldnt be better.
ReplyDeleteGreat poem about the pulling...
ReplyDeleteTerse lines and compelling images... Nice!
ReplyDeletePerfectly expressed.
ReplyDeleteRemembering how to walk in the dark Love that Can relate to that Great poem
ReplyDeleteSo we wait
ReplyDeletefor celestial progress
One gives way to the moon more often than not!
Hank
A beauty, Rob. The pull of the moon is universal.
ReplyDeleteWe do feel that unavoidable pull.
ReplyDeleteWow, I love this:
ReplyDelete"So we wait
for celestial progress"