Peaks
stack pillars
of pebbles,
and grains of sand
into cones,
amid the mountains.
The terrain
seems unaltered,
and always returning
to smooth
from rain and wind;
Until some rocks,
alter the flow
of a flood,
to collect the silt
of a new island.
Inspired,
men in the valley,
climb
to leave stones
on the apexes,
leaving them taller.
-Robert L Jackson III
I love the rocks and stones in your poem. Rob, would you email me at wildwomantwo@gmail.com ? I have a question. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely poem and maybe that is what men do, carry stones, to the top, leaving them taller....
ReplyDeleteThis feels like the men are building something new... working together with nature to form something... it takes time but sometimes we know what will be.
ReplyDeleteI like the contrast between the first and final stanzas. A good read here for me.
ReplyDeleteI'm left to ponder the conundrum of the purpose of the men in the valley. Intriguing write!
ReplyDeleteThis was tasty and earthy for me. I could see myself right there in your poem climbing and enjoying the view for what it is. remarkable and very natural indeed.
ReplyDeleteWhat a poignant piece of writing showing the almost futile actions of man to be remembered in the whole scenario of Earths existence.
ReplyDeleteAs the comments reveal: there is a layered analogy in this piece. Awesome writing!
ReplyDeleteAnimal instinct, marking ones territory. But, I love the view,
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
Nice :)
ReplyDeleteI love the photo and the poem. So much depth in your words.
ReplyDeleteI love this poem! So simple and direct, yet so richly evocative and profound.
ReplyDeletea wonderful adventure climbing through those mountain paths
ReplyDeleteLovely poem!
ReplyDeleteI like the fact that the terrain always returns to smooth.. that was so well put.
ReplyDeleteThis is lovely!!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and thought provoking! Ironically, I toured Hoover Dam today and kept thinking back to your words while looking at the construction images and listening to real life accounts. Such a mammoth human endeavor--with many sacrifices. Still: a creation. Good work-as always.
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